tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2618640290655447099.post5605923631392835302..comments2023-09-19T08:56:51.374-07:00Comments on AHSTW 8th Grade English Blog 2015-2016: The Sweezy Road TripJimhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01928066388810835369noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2618640290655447099.post-82183317413044278792016-01-13T13:43:30.552-08:002016-01-13T13:43:30.552-08:00I think this ppow is very funny. It is also really...I think this ppow is very funny. It is also really written well. Good job ClaytonAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2618640290655447099.post-42880108508569690922015-12-11T10:30:57.292-08:002015-12-11T10:30:57.292-08:00That's where I think Brady was wrong. I though...That's where I think Brady was wrong. I thought the story was really good and funny and can't wait for part two.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2618640290655447099.post-42815735225520430682015-12-08T08:14:53.512-08:002015-12-08T08:14:53.512-08:00This PPOW was really funny, but at the beginning o...This PPOW was really funny, but at the beginning of the story you just told the reader what the story was about. You need to let the information flow with the story.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com